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general store / monday morning 
19th-Oct-2006 06:22 pm
title(s): general store / monday morning
rating(s): 14a for brothers in love.
notes: two ickle baby ficlets for halfshellvenus, happy birthday. ♥ and the first one is also for belovedsnail: found a place for that softserve vanilla/ammunition. :)


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01.
Sam eats half-melted soft serve vanilla alone at the end of a diner's bar, plastic spoon bent and twisted at the handle. He thinks about how he can't live without his brother. Or ammunition. Or ice cream.

The bell above the door jingles and Dean struts in and looks around trying to find Sam. Their eyes catch and hold, and then Dean slides on to the barstool beside him and steals his spoon.

"You're welcome." Dean mutters, and Sam grins because Dean's back and because he totally ate all the cherries and sprinkles first, hah!


2a.
"Dean," Sam whispered, "Dean, wake up."

Dean slid down under the covers further. It was warm, stark contrast to the cold outside, white blankets over the trees and the cars and them in their bed.

Sam laughed in his ear. "Dean, we have to get up."

"Says who?" Dean whispered back.

2b.
It was a monday, and they were sick of it already.

They slept in until one, just to get most of it over with. Sam insisted they get up, even though Dean's hands on the inside seam of Sam's pj bottoms were warm and familiar.

They kissed across the counter in the room's kitchenette, saying good morning with their hands, good afternoon and hello and i'd missed you with their lips and teeth. They had lunch for breakfast, stealing fries and salad from each other in a diner's tiny corner booth.
Comments 
19th-Oct-2006 10:34 pm (UTC)
*soft, happy sigh*

Oh. Oh. I love you.
20th-Oct-2006 01:04 am (UTC)
awwwwwww. ♥

thank you kindly!
19th-Oct-2006 10:37 pm (UTC)
i was going to say i found 2a impossible charming, but then 2B HAPPENED AND I FELL IN LOVE.
20th-Oct-2006 01:05 am (UTC)
love!

I have to admit that 2b is my favourite of those as well. Thank you. ♥♥
20th-Oct-2006 12:45 am (UTC)
:D Sam the ice-cream thief! I share his problem.... ;) And the maraschino cherries are the toxic, artificial, cough-inducing best EVER!

I loved both of 2a and 2b-- the gentle humor and cuddliness in the first, and the sweet, schmoopiness of 2b.

*Happy sigh* Schmoop is the best! Especially when it's loving/teasing schmoop and not girly schmoop, and you definitely brought that to the diner!

Thank you so much Gisela! *hugs fics and you, and curls up in the warm bed with them next to Sam and Dean*
20th-Oct-2006 01:17 am (UTC)
You're welcome! It's my pleasure and I'm glad you liked the schmoopiness of it. ♥
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20th-Oct-2006 03:22 am (UTC)
Oh heavens, thank you. ♥♥
20th-Oct-2006 04:29 am (UTC)
Awwwww, nice!
So nice. Ate all the sprinkles!
Heeeee.

Lovely stuff.

mcee rec'd this.
20th-Oct-2006 08:47 pm (UTC)
Aww, hahah. :D

Thanks!
20th-Oct-2006 06:09 am (UTC)
Meep.

His brother, ammunition, and ice cream. Wee!Sammy certainly has awesome (bizarre) priorities.

Oh the love. It sweeps me up and twirls me around with the wondrousness. You are a goddess :D
20th-Oct-2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much. ♥♥
20th-Oct-2006 08:32 am (UTC)
just...lovely. ;)
20th-Oct-2006 08:50 pm (UTC)
ohh, thank you.
20th-Oct-2006 11:56 am (UTC)
I love you ... plain and simple I love you



BTW please go to amethyst_orchid and friend it. got some website stuff going on I want you to be apart of
20th-Oct-2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
thank you. :)
20th-Oct-2006 03:55 pm (UTC)
Yay! Your writing makes me all shmushy on the boys! They're so adorable and brotherly dorks and IN LOVE! *cuddles boys*
20th-Oct-2006 08:51 pm (UTC)
wheeee smushy!

I love reading/writing them like that, oh gosh, I'm so happy you like it. :)
20th-Oct-2006 10:41 pm (UTC)
He thinks about how he can't live without his brother. Or ammunition. Or ice cream.

oh, how lovely. i love the juxtaposition of that, the sort of summarization of [the way Sam sees] their lives---they've got each other, and hunting, and the weird, sweet little creature comforts they've picked up along the way. everything about all three of these ficlets is so familiar and soft and glowy, and i'm all curled up in a giant hoodie that belonged to my former flatmate with this cold windy weather outside, just soaking it in. ♥

the idea of the two of them having a sort of...snow day makes me smile. as always, you made it so vivid in so few words, and when i said i was just all snuggled up and basking, that really about covered it.
21st-Oct-2006 03:10 am (UTC)
I'm just going to bask in the glow for a little, okay? :D

♥♥

...

♥♥♥♥♥♥
21st-Oct-2006 12:39 am (UTC)
Oh. OH. These are ridiculously, wonderfully adorable &hearts:
21st-Oct-2006 03:10 am (UTC)
Oh thank you kindly. :D
22nd-Oct-2006 01:59 am (UTC)
These are darling. As sweet and delicious and illicit as ice cream and sleeping in. ♥
22nd-Oct-2006 03:57 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you. :D
24th-Oct-2006 11:16 am (UTC)
Oh, these are just so gorgeous and melty and make me very happy!
24th-Oct-2006 02:31 pm (UTC)
then my work here is done. ♥
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