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[Supernatural] 'cause no one's looking 
26th-Feb-2007 01:29 pm
title. 'cause no one's looking
rating. 14a, Sam/Dean preslash.
notes. for 100_ghosts prompt "gift horse."

Dean slept with all his clothes on; too tired to shower or change out, to even strip down out of dirty jeans and just as bad buttonup shirt. Just unbuckled and fell back, out like a light.

Sam stared until he couldn't, gritted his teeth, took a hot shower with his fist pulling at his cock like he was trying to exorcise it. Made sure the lights were out before he got into bed, wet hair staining.

Morning. Dean's buckle is pulling fabric down, he's hard and if Sam looked he'd be able to see more than he should want.

"Sammy," Dean says.
26th-Feb-2007 07:07 pm (UTC)
First of all, music choice: Zeppelin yay!

Second, the drabble: beautiful. Like song lyrics with atmosphere, or atmosphere with lyricism, something I can't quite touch but can still breathe in.
28th-Feb-2007 06:56 pm (UTC)
I posted this at work, and I'm lucky enough to be the one who picks the music. Also, I'm lucky in that Led Zeppelin is my coworker's favourite band. :))

And ♥♥ - thank you. :)

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28th-Feb-2007 08:43 pm (UTC)
doubleplus good. ;))
26th-Feb-2007 10:08 pm (UTC)
"Sammy," Dean says.
Ooh, it's like the edge of a dramatic shift here, this last line. I love that sense of dangling toward some kind of doom here. :)
28th-Feb-2007 08:45 pm (UTC)
That's exactly the feeling I was hoping for, awesome. ♥♥

thank you. :))
26th-Feb-2007 11:55 pm (UTC)
mmmphn! *bites fist*
28th-Feb-2007 08:45 pm (UTC)
gumpffh! :))
27th-Feb-2007 05:29 am (UTC)
i used to fall asleep in my clothes all the time in high school (probably because i had to get up at 6:20 every day), and i'd wake up at two in the morning with all the lights still on and the seams from my jeans imprinted all over my legs. it was silly.

anyway, i love the contrasts here between Dean, who's all exhausted and in a state of collapse, and Sam, who's all pacing-and-strained-tendons-in-his-neck tense. and there's so much promise in that "Sammy" at the end, somehow, which is fantastic.

28th-Feb-2007 09:48 pm (UTC)
My family has a habit of going to take naps after lunch on Sunday; I usually end up just reading for a while, but sometimes I fall asleep in my regular clothes and I concur re. seam imprints. :)

And I'm so pleased you like that. ♥♥ I have to admit that I'm really fond of that ending. :)

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28th-Feb-2007 09:50 pm (UTC)
thank you! :))
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